Rough cut of our video

This is our rough cut of our music video. A lot of the clips are out of time as the footage moved slightly before we exported. I have now changed this on our actual video on Final Cut Express and the timings are all correct. We also decided that some of the shots in our video were too long/dragged on therefore we decided to add some split screens in between him performing, and the narrative of her dancing. We have used particular shots of the dancer showing pain, such as her holding her foot in pain, and a shot of her crying, these are put in a split screen with shots of her dancing and shots of the artist singing. This adds another element to our music video and makes it more interesting.
Apart from these obvious problems with the video, and the fact that the quality we exported it in isn't as clear as we hoped, I am very happy with how our video is looking such as the washed out colour we have included in this rough cut.